Our first finished narrative. Author: Abraham

The tale of the Monster with Blue and Black hair

Mr Sam was a lonely guy. No one knew about him because he kept to himself. He was twentyone and had long spikey hair.

One night he was walking in the streets. Mr Sam had just finished work. He had no car but he had a bike. It was a silver mountain bike. Mr Sam was a little bit scared because he could hear spooky noises. He could hear thunder, fork lightening, spoon lightening and knife lightening. It was going to be a weird stormy night. The streets were foggy. Mr Sam’s house was a couple of blocks away. Mr Sam was so afraid that he dropped his bike. He decided to run all the way to his house instead.

Soon Mr Sam was at his front gate. Mr Sam reached to get his key from under the mat. He felt his key but something was biting him. there were little insects under the mat. They were injecting venom into Mr Sam. Mr Sam had no idea.

The time was 10.30 in the morning. One hour later Mr Sam was to turn into a monster. It was time for Sam to change. Mr Sam’s only friend Mark came over. Mark saw Sam and he shouted out loud “What happened to you man?”

Mr Sam was black and blue, including his hair. his hair was as sharp as blades off a sword. his friend Mark was running back to his car But his car was already crushed because Sam had already thrown a tree on top of it!

Mr Sam was furious! he walked into the city. He nearly demolished the whole town. Mr Sam climbed up to the top of the tallest volcano and looked down at what he had done. Mr Sam, the monster, was very happy and pleased with what he had done.

Not much time passed before Sam changed back into his human self.
It was 6.00 o’clock that night. He felL asleep. Mr Sam was very tired but he didn’t know why. Sam’s friend Mark was hiding in the drain. He was still too terified to come out. When Mr Sam woke up from his sleep, he went outside for some fresh air. He thought to
himself “Did an earthquake hit the city?” Sam asked his next door neighbour Frank. Frank said no, a horrible monster had busted nearly the Whole town. Sam had wanted to find out what kind of monster had destroyed the town.

Mr Sam went walking in the streets to try to find more clues. He saw a wanted poster on a pole. It said ‘THIS MONSTER IS ON THE LOOSE.’ Sam said to himself “I HAVE SEEN THAT MONSTER BEFORE. I THINK I SAW HIM LAST NIGHT! OH NO! HOW AM I GOING TO TElL EVERYBODY? I REMEMBER EVERYTHING NOW! I WAS THE MONSTER!!”

Everybody gasped with fear when they heard Mr Sam. People were shouting out “He’s the monster!”
“Well I know little insects bit me. Then I lost my temper and that is why I destroyed the whole town. It wasn’t my fault!” yelled Sam.

Two weeks later the whole town wanted to get together and find the little insects. “Then after we find them, we get all our money and build a new town,” they said.

So they all went on a hunt to look for the little insects but the first place they went to, of course, was Mr sam’s house. Everyone did a full inspection. They busted sam’s house. There was a lot of dust in the air. When the dust went away, there were little insects jumping everywhere. “Everybody get them!” they all yelled. It was sam’s next door neighbour Frank who caught the little insects who had caused all the trouble.

One year later the town was rebuilt.

By Abraham Payne